Liking the concept so far. Can't wait to learn more about the world and characters.
Artwork is bautifully done. 9.9/10. I get the thick style isn't for everyone but that does not mean it is a terrible quality. On the contrary, you seem to know how to make it work because usually it can be artistically unappealing unless that is your specific taste. This is actually cute and cuddly. Good work.
As for the writing... Something about it just feels off somehow. I felt like sentences were quite short. It makes characters seem unconvincing with their motives IMO if you can just rush through things like that. For example, Aron the MC only concern was the issue of species when he finds the "werewolf" and leaves off at that, despite the writer having the opportunity to explain Agnarr a bit more. The MC also has a (relatively) calm reaction to finding himself covered in fur and sporting some kind of lump on his face. If he is the calm type, I would have expected him to be more rational and come up with better theories than LARPers, but as said, the author is just speeding through everything that I (and readers?) dont have a frame of mind or emotional state of the MC much. He even plans to go back to the human world. A question I want answered is why would he go back looking like a lion? Does he think going back will change him into a human? Or is he just too panicked that he forgets he is a lion all together? I think the author is missing many chances to explain things from a deeper point. And as far as I can tell, there is no underlying narratives to justify witholding some of this information from the readers, with the exception that Agnarr tells the MC to nod or shake his head if he prefers not to speak. That was a cool way of saving what Udyrs and Sylvings are for a better time.
So far the plot makes sense and seems believable yet entertaining, and I have no issue with the sequence of events... On an imagination level everything seems great. However there exists a lot of opportunities to delve a bit more into their emotions, motivations, and personalities of the characters. As for their physical characteristics the author did quite well and lingered on them with the same amount of time we spent staring at them, though the writer could have done just a little more for Agnarr IMO so we can establish that he is someone important and not to be brushed off.
This is great. It seems like it could use copy-editing. There are little mistakes, but there are also places that show signs of not quite communicating the intended idea. An outside eye who has a good idea of what is trying to be communicated can be very helpful. I love some of the hinted at lore, and the art is looking top notch. Great work!
i read visual novels as a hobby! furry vns especially. so far i like the plot of this! it feels familiar to another one ive read i believe, but im not sure how, maybe just a familiar feeling to some other ones ive read! this FEELS new tho. even if its familiar its still new uncharted land and storys to be made! im very excited for the updates. the music is soft and uninterrupting. a problem with some vns is the music being so overpowering you cant focus on reading. even if i have the volume up, i can still read uninterupted. just taking a minute to appreciate the music and continuing. the cg's of aron ( default mc name ) are very detailed and interesting. even animated in one if im right! the way he is designed is an aspect i like. usually if a main character is turned into something it just looks... strange and unnerving. but this mc transformation feels fluid. visually appealing. even if he never turns back, he will still be a beautiful lion boy! and agnarr is a very kind and loving character. i cant wait to see more of his personality form along with mc! i cant wait to see the art style develop. the writing. and this story.
First, I hope we get an Android version. Second, this is a great isekai vn I've seen and no doubt it will be way better than FBTW! I love to see where the story will go!
I really must say that this visual novel is one of the most interesting I've read in a while, the plot sounds very mysterious with a protagonist who due to certain magical events is now a lion, which I think is great since it's not something that I have seen before, also the scenarios are impressive, I am surprised to see so many illustrated scenarios, and the characters are very good, the fact that they play with perspective and even have animations, simply beautiful, I hope to be able to read more of this interesting story soon ( although I also have to say it, agnarr is thick af ... and i reaaaaally like that >:3)
This is beautiful so far. You have very nice scenery and great details even down to small nuances in posture or just eye movement. Toss in a few of the animations, and just wow. You can see the care you put into this VN. The plot is a nice build as well so far. Very much looking forward to future chapters.
The Artwork looks amazing, the plot is, quite frankly a breath of fresh air, and Agnarr is perfect husbando material right there. However there are quite a lot of misspellings and some sentences that need to be revised to make better sense, a native level English beta-reader would certainly help. Do you have planned to make a Discord for the VN? If so, I'd love to join it.
this game sounds so promising but at the same time I can only imagine how much time it will take between the updates with how much art this game shows haha but I loved it, the details in the city, the house, the flowers and the forest, everything was really pretty and well done.
{Spoilers} I enjoyed seeing mc discovering himself and the little details that most games that have furry don't usually show, like when he was drinking water and everything was spilling, it was a nice detail, and when he closed his hand and then he saw his claws marks on his hand, this little things make more realistic. I really enjoyed so far.
like the premise so far, Agnarr personality is very different than what I thought he'd be but in a very good way. what impresses me the most is so many angles you've shown Agnarr. sides, front, back (dat ass). then there's the coding for his sprites wow. 12 different penis sprites, 6 soft, 6 hard that is dedication. even separated him into various individual limb angles too not to have too much memory having a full sprite for different emotions, actions which usually is a common mistake for 1st timers using renpy. But this "wattson (XT9K) program helper" avoided that entirely, incredible.
edit: accidentally posted comment earlier than intended to, whoops ^^"
glad you like Agnarr and his sprites ^.=.^yeah, I went abit overboard and made around 400 sprites for him. I've taken examples from other VNs on how they make the sprites and just had to make something for every possible scenario. Wattson is teaching me the coding, asking for help and he'll explain how to do it since it's mostly the basics stuff I couldn't understand online (you have no idea how many times I messed up the programming when I misunderstood the tutorials lol). I am terrible at coding ,=w=, so I'm a bit nervous to make the characters move around in next chapter. I'm all muscles and creativity, not much in the brain department. also, been to your page, you got a big collection of VNs and baras I need to check out between work >;3
If you need help with code, I can help you out too. I'm writing my own VN in Ren'Py, so I have experience playing through and adding my custom little touches to the project! Also, Wattson is a great coder too!
Crazy how "Human male isekai's into a world he is not familiar with and has sexual tension with a wolf" is a subgenre that rivals "Spooky creepy things happen to the mc while he dates one of several men" in the gay furry visual novel genre. Not to say anything to the quality to these games of course, just an interesting anecdote. I'll read this when I get home.
This is sooo adorable! n///n I adore the artwork, it's really good! :D All the backgrounds and sprites seriously go beyond what people normally do! ^^_ there are some grammar/spelling mistakes, but that's to be expected UwU Xou've done an excellent job for a solo project~! Keep up all the good work! ^_^/
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Wow very nice this is epic, amazing and fantastic VN i ever read.. whoa thanks for sharing this , i hoping this vn is focusing on story less horny..
Wow this is already very impressive. If you post a patreon page then let us know. I'm sure you could get some people to contribute and help.
I kinda like it but holy shit Agnarr is thick. I even scared to imagine how inevitable nsfw scenes with him would look like...
Liking the concept so far. Can't wait to learn more about the world and characters.
Artwork is bautifully done. 9.9/10. I get the thick style isn't for everyone but that does not mean it is a terrible quality. On the contrary, you seem to know how to make it work because usually it can be artistically unappealing unless that is your specific taste. This is actually cute and cuddly. Good work.
As for the writing... Something about it just feels off somehow. I felt like sentences were quite short. It makes characters seem unconvincing with their motives IMO if you can just rush through things like that. For example, Aron the MC only concern was the issue of species when he finds the "werewolf" and leaves off at that, despite the writer having the opportunity to explain Agnarr a bit more. The MC also has a (relatively) calm reaction to finding himself covered in fur and sporting some kind of lump on his face. If he is the calm type, I would have expected him to be more rational and come up with better theories than LARPers, but as said, the author is just speeding through everything that I (and readers?) dont have a frame of mind or emotional state of the MC much. He even plans to go back to the human world. A question I want answered is why would he go back looking like a lion? Does he think going back will change him into a human? Or is he just too panicked that he forgets he is a lion all together? I think the author is missing many chances to explain things from a deeper point. And as far as I can tell, there is no underlying narratives to justify witholding some of this information from the readers, with the exception that Agnarr tells the MC to nod or shake his head if he prefers not to speak. That was a cool way of saving what Udyrs and Sylvings are for a better time.
So far the plot makes sense and seems believable yet entertaining, and I have no issue with the sequence of events... On an imagination level everything seems great. However there exists a lot of opportunities to delve a bit more into their emotions, motivations, and personalities of the characters. As for their physical characteristics the author did quite well and lingered on them with the same amount of time we spent staring at them, though the writer could have done just a little more for Agnarr IMO so we can establish that he is someone important and not to be brushed off.
this looks promising, congrats! :D
Omg he is soooooo big~ I will give a try
i loved it!! pls keep this good job!
Will there be an Android version?
Does this game contain the nsfw stuff?
There was some hidden in the files ;-D
Ughh it's so good! Can't wait for the next build!
Same for me.
This is great. It seems like it could use copy-editing. There are little mistakes, but there are also places that show signs of not quite communicating the intended idea. An outside eye who has a good idea of what is trying to be communicated can be very helpful. I love some of the hinted at lore, and the art is looking top notch. Great work!
This is wonderful! I can't wait to see how the story unfolds.
For a first build this is amazing, can't wait to see more form this VN!
This looks amazing! I really hope we get an android build soon.
i read visual novels as a hobby! furry vns especially. so far i like the plot of this! it feels familiar to another one ive read i believe, but im not sure how, maybe just a familiar feeling to some other ones ive read! this FEELS new tho. even if its familiar its still new uncharted land and storys to be made! im very excited for the updates. the music is soft and uninterrupting. a problem with some vns is the music being so overpowering you cant focus on reading. even if i have the volume up, i can still read uninterupted. just taking a minute to appreciate the music and continuing. the cg's of aron ( default mc name ) are very detailed and interesting. even animated in one if im right! the way he is designed is an aspect i like. usually if a main character is turned into something it just looks... strange and unnerving. but this mc transformation feels fluid. visually appealing. even if he never turns back, he will still be a beautiful lion boy! and agnarr is a very kind and loving character. i cant wait to see more of his personality form along with mc! i cant wait to see the art style develop. the writing. and this story.
This vn is so nice cant wait for more updates.
Imma follow this real quick-
First, I hope we get an Android version. Second, this is a great isekai vn I've seen and no doubt it will be way better than FBTW! I love to see where the story will go!
I want to Android download it game pls, thx
A really good VN so far. I am really curious how the story go on
why
that's not even funny but ok-
Interesting premise, very early I can tell, but the artwork is absolutely top notch.
Amazing VN!
love it, cant wait for more.
I really must say that this visual novel is one of the most interesting I've read in a while, the plot sounds very mysterious with a protagonist who due to certain magical events is now a lion, which I think is great since it's not something that I have seen before, also the scenarios are impressive, I am surprised to see so many illustrated scenarios, and the characters are very good, the fact that they play with perspective and even have animations, simply beautiful, I hope to be able to read more of this interesting story soon ( although I also have to say it, agnarr is thick af ... and i reaaaaally like that >:3)
This is beautiful so far. You have very nice scenery and great details even down to small nuances in posture or just eye movement. Toss in a few of the animations, and just wow. You can see the care you put into this VN. The plot is a nice build as well so far. Very much looking forward to future chapters.
Oh I wish there would be an Android version
Great game, with a problem what sylving means
The Artwork looks amazing, the plot is, quite frankly a breath of fresh air, and Agnarr is perfect husbando material right there. However there are quite a lot of misspellings and some sentences that need to be revised to make better sense, a native level English beta-reader would certainly help. Do you have planned to make a Discord for the VN? If so, I'd love to join it.
Kudos, and keep up the good work! :)
Pretty heckin good so far, cant wait for more, :D
this game sounds so promising but at the same time I can only imagine how much time it will take between the updates with how much art this game shows haha but I loved it, the details in the city, the house, the flowers and the forest, everything was really pretty and well done.
{Spoilers} I enjoyed seeing mc discovering himself and the little details that most games that have furry don't usually show, like when he was drinking water and everything was spilling, it was a nice detail, and when he closed his hand and then he saw his claws marks on his hand, this little things make more realistic. I really enjoyed so far.
Like it so far, should be interesting to see where it goes.
like the premise so far, Agnarr personality is very different than what I thought he'd be but in a very good way. what impresses me the most is so many angles you've shown Agnarr. sides, front, back (dat ass). then there's the coding for his sprites wow. 12 different penis sprites, 6 soft, 6 hard that is dedication. even separated him into various individual limb angles too not to have too much memory having a full sprite for different emotions, actions which usually is a common mistake for 1st timers using renpy. But this "wattson (XT9K) program helper" avoided that entirely, incredible.
edit: accidentally posted comment earlier than intended to, whoops ^^"
glad you like Agnarr and his sprites ^.=.^yeah, I went abit overboard and made around 400 sprites for him. I've taken examples from other VNs on how they make the sprites and just had to make something for every possible scenario. Wattson is teaching me the coding, asking for help and he'll explain how to do it since it's mostly the basics stuff I couldn't understand online (you have no idea how many times I messed up the programming when I misunderstood the tutorials lol). I am terrible at coding ,=w=, so I'm a bit nervous to make the characters move around in next chapter. I'm all muscles and creativity, not much in the brain department.
also, been to your page, you got a big collection of VNs and baras I need to check out between work >;3
If you need help with code, I can help you out too. I'm writing my own VN in Ren'Py, so I have experience playing through and adding my custom little touches to the project! Also, Wattson is a great coder too!
Will there be an Android version?
Crazy how "Human male isekai's into a world he is not familiar with and has sexual tension with a wolf" is a subgenre that rivals "Spooky creepy things happen to the mc while he dates one of several men" in the gay furry visual novel genre. Not to say anything to the quality to these games of course, just an interesting anecdote. I'll read this when I get home.
Can’t wait when some kind of adult cartoon or anime finally starts spoofing this kind of thing similarly how Futurama spoofed amnesia trope…
Hmm... Strange FBTW and Adastra vibes...
yeah the what i felt to but only FBTW vibes
Can't be FBTW, No "My Wolf" and toxic relationships in the VN yet. XD
This is sooo adorable! n///n I adore the artwork, it's really good! :D All the backgrounds and sprites seriously go beyond what people normally do! ^^_ there are some grammar/spelling mistakes, but that's to be expected UwU Xou've done an excellent job for a solo project~! Keep up all the good work! ^_^/
I wish you luck with this; looks promising, but I'm sure there will be other romantic interests in the future.
Android please dev!🥺
I want to Play This in My android Phoner