A wonderful novel so far. Neat characters and nice setting. Only thing I would love to see are more decission choices. Otherwise great... no... outstanding work.
1. I love the backgrounds and how much detail are put into them.
2. I find it slightly comedic that the streat just outside the house has such creative store names as 'tasty fruit', 'little herbs', and of course '*picture of a cleaver*'.
3. Please, please keep up with the updates I am begging you. I have followed way too many VNs that have now been taking a hiatus for over a year.
4. Why is it specifically the developers of gay furry visual novels that constantly have stuff horrible happening in their life.
Edit: so I just fully finished the VN and I've only fallen more in love with it, but I do have one gripe. I think you should probably lock some things in the extra section of the gallery because looking through that I spoiled the comedic bit with a Gertrude for myself. It was still very entertaining but I wish I hadn't seen her character sheet before actually seen the character.
okay, I absolute love the art on this, love seeing the expressions and movements, it's really well done and so far I only have one complaint, why did u make such hot characters?! I remember seeing somewhere that Agnarr it's the only LI and I was fine with it until this new chapter came out and I got to know Brumm, I know it problably won't happen but damn I wish we could have a poly route to be squished between these two, I know they are huge and in real life the mc would die getting dp by these two but I think it would be a great way to go lol
I don't have a set schedule when the next chapter's out, but I'm doing my best to get time working on it whenever I can. hope to get it ready somewhere this summer.
First time through the three chapters and dang this story is really good! I have found a small bit of typos, but over all I love the characters and atmosphere of this game! Brumm is my fav so far, tough Agnarr is still catching my eye. 10/10!
First build of this game was really good except for a few uncanny looking Agnarr expressions, but now he has so many expressions each more adorable than the last and the fact that there's such great(and so many) animations makes this VN a 10/10 even before we get into the juicier parts of the story, which looks to be very good so far too.
MAKE IT STOP AGNARR, MIKKEL WONT STOP TELLING ME RANDOM THINGS AND WONT EXPLAIN THEM EVEN WHEN I ASK I DID SCHOOL ALREADY DONT MAKE ME GO BACK PLEASEEEE
i waited... a whole year... JUST TO STARE AT CRYSTALS FOR AN HOUR!? (honestly that last scene had me staring for an hour XD) it was worth the wait though, kudos to the animators and the attention to detail! out of the many VN's I've read, none have visually stimulated me like this one has. i love the animations, and the little tiny details (basically a sleeping fox) the VN has to not just set the scene with words but with visuals as well, keep up the AMAZING work!!
Ever since I played the third chapter, I cannot help but feel a frozen ice in my chest and I'm not sure why? maybe I felt comfortable or at home with this game or is it because how genuine Agnaar is? I don't know This comment is mostly a mental dump lol but thank you for all this, I cannot wait to play more, and this is already one of my favorite games ever.
Completed the whole story in one night! One critique that I do have is I wish I could see more decision making. The few times that it prompted me to make a decision made the story just that more immersive! There were a lot of points where it felt like it was getting ready to give me a decision and I was big hype to participate in the story but then I was hit with disappointment when the story continued, and the main character made a decision All in all a really good narrative and very excited to see how this develops!
Seriously I love the world-building and introduction, the writing makes it truly feel like you are a tourist in a magical world and it is captivating! It makes the reader want to know more about the world and its peoples.
Overall, I love CHAPTER 3 and appreciate your dedication to the project.
Please don't tell me that I have to wait another 8 months for the next chapter. I. NEED. MOOOOOOORE.
Fantastic chapter btw. The only thing I find weird is when Brumm uses "BRUMM1_head_brows5.webp" together with "BRUMM1_head_eyes2.webp", it makes the pupils look disoriented. I noticed this when he uses this combination right after Gjertrud walks off. Aside from that and a few writing errors, the rest is amazing and I really look forward to what happens next.
I hear you, I edited that scene with Brumm's sprites to make it less jarring. you'll see it in the next release.
I aim to make it in less than 8 months for chapter 4, having less new assets to make so I can focus on the writing for it. thank you for giving me your thoughts about that scene and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter ^^
yeah, I found that bug too. after Renpy had its update recently, it gave Sylving a small bug that I couldn't do much about. it only bugged the savefile, but you might have to delete them and start over from chapter 1.
Hello! am so excited for the next update!. Also I hope I don't appear as a negative person when I express my opinions on this but I hope this VN does not have those weird scenes where we saw our love interest having "fun" with someone else just so we can have a scene that will emphasize the "hotness" or "a sex scene" of the character (Agnarr). Thank you and I really love this VN.
Just started this Visual Novel and finished 0.2. It was shorter than expected but it was really good. The writing. The art. The .gif animations, if that's what they are. All really good. The emotional build you've with the characters makes me feel connected and concerned for them. I want the big guy to just hold MC and tell them its going to be alright. I want to read more and now I following and eager for more
hello I am French and my name is jonas, I really like your story and if you want I will be happy to help you translate it, if you are interested you can DM me on instagram (jonas_dt0) 😃
Another thing to add is that I hope Aron asks to be trained by Agnarr in order to not be dependant and useless without him. A major issue I see in those types of VN is the mc being useless without the main LI so Aron asking to be trained and showing being able to fend of for himself would be an ecxelent decision
That is very common in vns and it gets kind of annoying when so many of them resort to the mc (human main characters especially) being weak and inferior and cannot last without the big strong love interest protecting them. I like to see a mc that is more capable in things such as defending themselves, and contributing to the story.
You sir, fucking get it. Its so fucking annoying! Like, just because the player have severe daddy issues and needs emotional support doesn't mean the protagonist should be fucking useless
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A wonderful novel so far.
Neat characters and nice setting.
Only thing I would love to see are more decission choices.
Otherwise great... no... outstanding work.
The way the animation is smoothly played out, especially in that yawning scene, mm! It's already good! Recommended for sure👍
1. I love the backgrounds and how much detail are put into them.
2. I find it slightly comedic that the streat just outside the house has such creative store names as 'tasty fruit', 'little herbs', and of course '*picture of a cleaver*'.
3. Please, please keep up with the updates I am begging you. I have followed way too many VNs that have now been taking a hiatus for over a year.
4. Why is it specifically the developers of gay furry visual novels that constantly have stuff horrible happening in their life.
Edit: so I just fully finished the VN and I've only fallen more in love with it, but I do have one gripe. I think you should probably lock some things in the extra section of the gallery because looking through that I spoiled the comedic bit with a Gertrude for myself. It was still very entertaining but I wish I hadn't seen her character sheet before actually seen the character.
okay, I absolute love the art on this, love seeing the expressions and movements, it's really well done and so far I only have one complaint, why did u make such hot characters?! I remember seeing somewhere that Agnarr it's the only LI and I was fine with it until this new chapter came out and I got to know Brumm, I know it problably won't happen but damn I wish we could have a poly route to be squished between these two, I know they are huge and in real life the mc would die getting dp by these two but I think it would be a great way to go lol
Honestly, that bear! can we romance him? TwT
Also, I'm glad this vr is not dead I really like where the story is going :3
The mc is like aang cuz when he lost his temper he glows lol AVATAR
When will chapter 4 be out ? I finished it yesterday and i'm still thinking about it.. <3
I don't have a set schedule when the next chapter's out, but I'm doing my best to get time working on it whenever I can. hope to get it ready somewhere this summer.
Can you make a Chinese version？你能想出一个中文版吗？玲玲能做中文版吗？有中文版吗？
chinese ver.
here you go
谢谢
I'm looking forward to Chapter 4! Any rough timeline?
I'm aiming for at least 20 chapters. Dalset (current location) takes about the first third of the whole story.
this is so good! I need more of this
So about Mikkel
NUUUUUUUUU
Here's to more from y'all~!
This is a well animated, visually pleasing backgrounds, unique characters and a lore that I would know more about
Can't wait for the next chapters
i love the moment of the beautyful woman xD
Man I'm loving this, here's hoping for more I wish y'all the best.
First time through the three chapters and dang this story is really good! I have found a small bit of typos, but over all I love the characters and atmosphere of this game! Brumm is my fav so far, tough Agnarr is still catching my eye. 10/10!
First build of this game was really good except for a few uncanny looking Agnarr expressions, but now he has so many expressions each more adorable than the last and the fact that there's such great(and so many) animations makes this VN a 10/10 even before we get into the juicier parts of the story, which looks to be very good so far too.
Can you name the music when Agnarr apologized for pointing a sword at us, please
it's called "Our Comfort", an original song made for Sylving, by Yafettimotius.
Oh my god! You best!
I made this for Lord Mikkel's Fans, Hope you guys like it❤️ STILL WAITING FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER 😭
Great design. Nicely done.
Thank you so much😊
GET OUUUUUUT 💀💀💀💀💀
🥶
MAKE IT STOP AGNARR, MIKKEL WONT STOP TELLING ME RANDOM THINGS AND WONT EXPLAIN THEM EVEN WHEN I ASK
I DID SCHOOL ALREADY DONT MAKE ME GO BACK PLEASEEEE
Really unique, and funny. Im excited for the next update, even if I have to wait.
i waited... a whole year... JUST TO STARE AT CRYSTALS FOR AN HOUR!? (honestly that last scene had me staring for an hour XD) it was worth the wait though, kudos to the animators and the attention to detail! out of the many VN's I've read, none have visually stimulated me like this one has. i love the animations, and the little tiny details (basically a sleeping fox) the VN has to not just set the scene with words but with visuals as well, keep up the AMAZING work!!
Ever since I played the third chapter, I cannot help but feel a frozen ice in my chest and I'm not sure why? maybe I felt comfortable or at home with this game or is it because how genuine Agnaar is? I don't know This comment is mostly a mental dump lol but thank you for all this, I cannot wait to play more, and this is already one of my favorite games ever.
my actual birthday is in the story april the seventeenth love the story so far heheh
that's cool hehe x3 makes it a step more immersive for you then, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far!
cant wait for the rest ^^
Completed the whole story in one night!
One critique that I do have is I wish I could see more decision making. The few times that it prompted me to make a decision made the story just that more immersive! There were a lot of points where it felt like it was getting ready to give me a decision and I was big hype to participate in the story but then I was hit with disappointment when the story continued, and the main character made a decision
All in all a really good narrative and very excited to see how this develops!
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Lord Mikkel my beloved 😭💕
Seriously I love the world-building and introduction, the writing makes it truly feel like you are a tourist in a magical world and it is captivating! It makes the reader want to know more about the world and its peoples.
Overall, I love CHAPTER 3 and appreciate your dedication to the project.
Hope you like it🥰🌹
Many thanks for the update Drakita. I'm thoroughly enjoying your story.
Is Lord Mikkel meant to come across a bit camp at times, or is it just my reading of him?
yeah, Mikkel's a little camp. having some fun with his overreactions and how much in his own head he gets x3
Please don't tell me that I have to wait another 8 months for the next chapter. I. NEED. MOOOOOOORE.
Fantastic chapter btw. The only thing I find weird is when Brumm uses "BRUMM1_head_brows5.webp" together with "BRUMM1_head_eyes2.webp", it makes the pupils look disoriented. I noticed this when he uses this combination right after Gjertrud walks off. Aside from that and a few writing errors, the rest is amazing and I really look forward to what happens next.
I hear you, I edited that scene with Brumm's sprites to make it less jarring. you'll see it in the next release.
I aim to make it in less than 8 months for chapter 4, having less new assets to make so I can focus on the writing for it. thank you for giving me your thoughts about that scene and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter ^^
Seems to be quite buggy if you launch from your most recent save
yeah, I found that bug too. after Renpy had its update recently, it gave Sylving a small bug that I couldn't do much about. it only bugged the savefile, but you might have to delete them and start over from chapter 1.
oh update ? >.>
It's to comes out tomorrow based on this update. https://drakita.itch.io/sylving/devlog/680696/sylving-chap-3-full-beta-on-patreo...
oh yeah just wondered but thanks
I'm pretty excited about this VN. I guess I have a thing for transported to another world FVN's and Muscles.
Hello! am so excited for the next update!. Also I hope I don't appear as a negative person when I express my opinions on this but I hope this VN does not have those weird scenes where we saw our love interest having "fun" with someone else just so we can have a scene that will emphasize the "hotness" or "a sex scene" of the character (Agnarr). Thank you and I really love this VN.
no worries, I have no plans for Agnarr to fuck someone else in the story. but it wont be any less dramatic and hot I3 huhu
Yes Please i hope it update soon🫣
Just started this Visual Novel and finished 0.2. It was shorter than expected but it was really good. The writing. The art. The .gif animations, if that's what they are. All really good. The emotional build you've with the characters makes me feel connected and concerned for them. I want the big guy to just hold MC and tell them its going to be alright. I want to read more and now I following and eager for more
Keep up the great work
-James
Does it have the same ending he sits next to me and I fall asleep
i cant wait for the next chapter and the animations for the characters are op i love how cute the wolf is owo
hello I am French and my name is jonas, I really like your story and if you want I will be happy to help you translate it, if you are interested you can DM me on instagram (jonas_dt0) 😃
I loved this game! I really want chapter 2 for android 😀
Another thing to add is that I hope Aron asks to be trained by Agnarr in order to not be dependant and useless without him. A major issue I see in those types of VN is the mc being useless without the main LI so Aron asking to be trained and showing being able to fend of for himself would be an ecxelent decision
That is very common in vns and it gets kind of annoying when so many of them resort to the mc (human main characters especially) being weak and inferior and cannot last without the big strong love interest protecting them. I like to see a mc that is more capable in things such as defending themselves, and contributing to the story.
You sir, fucking get it. Its so fucking annoying! Like, just because the player have severe daddy issues and needs emotional support doesn't mean the protagonist should be fucking useless