hello I am French and my name is jonas, I really like your story and if you want I will be happy to help you translate it, if you are interested you can DM me on instagram (jonas_dt0) 😃
Another thing to add is that I hope Aron asks to be trained by Agnarr in order to not be dependant and useless without him. A major issue I see in those types of VN is the mc being useless without the main LI so Aron asking to be trained and showing being able to fend of for himself would be an ecxelent decision
That is very common in vns and it gets kind of annoying when so many of them resort to the mc (human main characters especially) being weak and inferior and cannot last without the big strong love interest protecting them. I like to see a mc that is more capable in things such as defending themselves, and contributing to the story.
You sir, fucking get it. Its so fucking annoying! Like, just because the player have severe daddy issues and needs emotional support doesn't mean the protagonist should be fucking useless
I meant, only topping is so sad for people who like bottoming, such as me. But yes i agree. There should be an option for the ones who like penetrating 🍆💦🍑
is there a set time the next release may be out i loved this FVN and cant wait for more. i love the idea you have for the story and i have high hopes for it
Aghh, i regret for ending two chapters so quickly!? But overall i really like how there's animation to it, the background art, and the character/sprite is really good with their expression and body language and also the writings too. I already saved this on my library so i could check for any updates on this game just like the other FVN's i saved, cause i think this could be one of the best visual novel i read.
why's the logo to the right? it should be to the left, and there's a strange, uneven black line and has a light box around it, so this is certainly not from Itch.
did you download an unofficial android version of it before downloading it here on Itch? that might be why you can't update on your phone, as this one messed with the codes for your phone.
chap 2 is the one available for download. I'm giving the number in the corner for the chapter released (ver 0.2), so you can see what chapter's up by that number (chap 3 will be ver 0.3 and so on)
does Mikkel have brown or orange hair? chap 1 had brown hair, but I changed it to orange in the next release. if he has brown hair, then I don't know how to help you ><;
it'll be optional. there's censor one to avoid the few nude parts in the story. when the sexual scenes comes, there'll be the option to do it or just have a short cuddling moment that doesn't affect the story.
Holy shit dude. I just started reading and it's already so good. Aside from the obvious amazing plot, I seriously thought it would be cringey but instead, I get greeted with animations, lots of different sprites and mystery after mystery that is being unveiled. It's been hard to find a good new VN like this for awhile. Time to go to Patreon.
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hello I am French and my name is jonas, I really like your story and if you want I will be happy to help you translate it, if you are interested you can DM me on instagram (jonas_dt0) 😃
I loved this game! I really want chapter 2 for android 😀
Another thing to add is that I hope Aron asks to be trained by Agnarr in order to not be dependant and useless without him. A major issue I see in those types of VN is the mc being useless without the main LI so Aron asking to be trained and showing being able to fend of for himself would be an ecxelent decision
That is very common in vns and it gets kind of annoying when so many of them resort to the mc (human main characters especially) being weak and inferior and cannot last without the big strong love interest protecting them. I like to see a mc that is more capable in things such as defending themselves, and contributing to the story.
You sir, fucking get it. Its so fucking annoying! Like, just because the player have severe daddy issues and needs emotional support doesn't mean the protagonist should be fucking useless
I hope we are able to top without the need to ever bottom beforehand. Overall having the option to top only and not bottom at all would be nice
What about people like bottoming? 🤧
This is why I'm asking for the option to be able to freely choose between topping or bottoming without the need to do one or the other
I meant, only topping is so sad for people who like bottoming, such as me. But yes i agree. There should be an option for the ones who like penetrating 🍆💦🍑
is there a set time the next release may be out i loved this FVN and cant wait for more. i love the idea you have for the story and i have high hopes for it
Aghh, i regret for ending two chapters so quickly!? But overall i really like how there's animation to it, the background art, and the character/sprite is really good with their expression and body language and also the writings too. I already saved this on my library so i could check for any updates on this game just like the other FVN's i saved, cause i think this could be one of the best visual novel i read.
Is this chapter 2?I redownload it 5 times now...
why's the logo to the right? it should be to the left, and there's a strange, uneven black line and has a light box around it, so this is certainly not from Itch.
did you download an unofficial android version of it before downloading it here on Itch? that might be why you can't update on your phone, as this one messed with the codes for your phone.
oooh...so that's why...yup I dowload it from other websites cuz the other websites says this is the official syvling.
Is there chapter 2 for Android?🥺
chap 2 is the one available for download. I'm giving the number in the corner for the chapter released (ver 0.2), so you can see what chapter's up by that number (chap 3 will be ver 0.3 and so on)
I dunno how to download cuz when I downloaded it.it still says I'm in chap.1...🤧😭
I downloaded it again, and it is the second chapter version. the first chapter never had the android release. where does it say it's chapter 1?
It says I'm still ver.1?Is something wrong with this websites or my phone?🥲
does Mikkel have brown or orange hair? chap 1 had brown hair, but I changed it to orange in the next release. if he has brown hair, then I don't know how to help you ><;
gotta ask is there gonna be nsfw?
it'll be optional. there's censor one to avoid the few nude parts in the story. when the sexual scenes comes, there'll be the option to do it or just have a short cuddling moment that doesn't affect the story.
Holy shit dude. I just started reading and it's already so good. Aside from the obvious amazing plot, I seriously thought it would be cringey but instead, I get greeted with animations, lots of different sprites and mystery after mystery that is being unveiled. It's been hard to find a good new VN like this for awhile. Time to go to Patreon.
PS: Do y'all accept donations?
glad you enjoy it so far!
as for donation, I'm not sure. I only use Patreon for this. you could do a one-time payment there, if you like.
Is there any height and weight on Agnarr?
Do I have to buy it play the full thing
no, this is a free VN. I forgot to add "to be continue" in the latest release. it'll take me years finishing this story.
that's ok take your time no rush